I can identify clear and specific avenues for revision of my work.
I can revise my work, focusing on using research and persuasive techniques.
Today’s Activities:
- Bellwork: Journal
- Work on revisions. Remember to work on your two Revision Goals.
- Example revision goals
- Add better pathos
- Add better logos
- Add better ethos
- Make my argument clearer
- Add research (or add more research)
- Cite my sources correctly
- Make a better appeal to my audience
- Add a quote (with a quote sandwich)
- Add a solution
- Prove that there is a problem
- Say more about X idea (X = your idea)
- Tell my audience what I want them to do
- Example revision goals
Assessment:
- Teacher will monitor ongoing revisions
- Revised drafts due on Tuesday (Wednesday – 7th period)
Documents/Texts:
- Student drafts w/ teacher comments
- Student-selected research sources
Accommodations/Modifications:
- Teacher will check in with students as they work
- Some students may be provided extended time to complete the revision